Fiction, Health and wellbeing, Melbourne, Writing

Small Annoyances

Carol is standing on her tippy-toes, so that she can make eye contact with the receptionist. So far, she’s being ignored. The woman, whose name tag reads Sheryl, is on her mobile.

‘Oh, I know,’ says Sheryl, sounding remarkably like Sybil Fawlty. So much so, that Carol looks around for Manuel or Basil.

Carol rests back on the soles of her feet. This bench is taller than most; probably so the average of height can rest their arms comfortably upon it while filling in forms. It’s quite common for Carol to face only the laminated edge in clinics. She is used to being overlooked, too; her diminutive stature sometimes leads to strangers assuming she’s a kid. Huffing with impatience, she rises again to her toes. Sheryl now has her back to the reception window.

‘And then, Bert tried to tell me she was a paragon of beauty. I mean, her? Beautiful?’

‘Excuse me,’ Carol interrupts. Her voice is cutting, like a hot knife through butter. ‘I’ve been waiting for a few minutes now. Could you consider holding your personal conversations in your own time?’

‘Gotta go, Katy. Patients are complaining,’ Sheryl says, her disdainful gaze rests on Carol. She places her phone down on the bench, clears her throat. ‘How can I help you this morning?’ Her tone is cold and biting.

‘Thank you. I’m here to see Dr Bottroff.’

‘Take a seat. He’ll be right out.’

Carol turns on her heel and takes her place in the waiting area. Her feet swing from the chair. She can hear Sheryl’s laugh from the other side of her window.

‘Bitch,’ Carol mutters under her breath. She takes a magazine, choosing not to focus on other people’s shit, and waits for her name to be called.

Photo by Kirill on Unsplash

13 thoughts on “Small Annoyances”

    1. I actually had an appointment at a clinic this morning, which formed the seed of the story. But I didn’t experience any of what Carol went through.
      Thanks for reading and commenting…I always love it when someone comments 🙂

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      1. I honestly try and comment on what I read. I guess I could be putting out a lot more “likes” but I’m too busy reading, Lol! I love comments too! I feel like I have “met” a lot of really nice people!

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      1. I am hoping that all around you is OK Linda. So many stories coming from Melbourne about people starting to hoard again. Is you suburb on the safe list? x

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      2. We’re fine, thanks, in a safe burb (inner east). My daughter had to have a covid test yesterday tho as she has a cold. Negative result came back today 🙏 All three of mine are now on school holidays for 2 weeks so we’ll just bunker down again I reckon. Thanks, appreciate you checking in âĪ


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